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The Cause and the Cure pt II by ~tinmanthegreat:icontinmanthegreat:





There’s no blood left in my brain
There’s no one left for me to blame
No skin left for hunger to maim
Liquid love will take away the pain

I go home, I check out of my life
My brain bleeds, like the joy of a knife
And I want for you
What I need to do
Break it and throw it away.

Toss me away, all broken and bent
Then make me pay, I must repent
And you’ll see me through
With my faith renewed
Bed it and go all the way

Give me this day, for pity’s sake
A moment of rest, as so much is at stake
And I know about you
What I’m going to do
Cock it and blow it away

Take me away, in the back of a van
Let me go free, a far ‘better’ man
And they’ll teach me to do
What I already knew
Save it and show it the way
©2005-2009 ~tinmanthegreat
:icontinmanthegreat:

Author's Comments

I have this history teacher, who's a cow, and I had a particularly bad day with her, and came home feeling beyond upset, so I got hammered, and felt REALLY good.

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:icongruntathon:
You sound like you need a good nap!

Or some baked beans.

Anyhow, I hear cows like to walk around in circles....
:icontinmanthegreat:
which is bizarre, 'cos in the book I wrote this at the bottom of the page I wrote "I think I need a nap"

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Stinson, Tiernan Guillermo (1988-2016): Poet, Author, Playwright, Musician, Actor, Artist, Comedian, Philosopher.
:iconlefthandcharity:
I like this. You've done a good job on it.

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you're singing me to sleep...i have never felt more alone.
:icontinmanthegreat:
Thank you, thankyou very much.

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Stinson, Tiernan Guillermo (1988-2016): Poet, Author, Playwright, Musician, Actor, Artist, Comedian, Philosopher.
:iconicesong:
undetstand that you got mad at this teacher by what you wrote in your poem..
though it was very well written, you've got a very good ryhme in it.. :clap:

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*Look positive at life and life will be positive back*
Life is a struggle! - but I'm willing to struggle...
:iconhammertime:
I thought it was ma'am jones, as i guessed in the previous deviation. wat a clever boy are we!
:icontinmanthegreat:
not Jonesy, oh no, the OTHER one

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Stinson, Tiernan Guillermo (1988-2016): Poet, Author, Playwright, Musician, Actor, Artist, Comedian, Philosopher.
:icontinmanthegreat:
Why thank you... :D

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Stinson, Tiernan Guillermo (1988-2016): Poet, Author, Playwright, Musician, Actor, Artist, Comedian, Philosopher.
:iconhammertime:
meh, close enough.

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